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Eliezer Yudkowsky's avatar

I admit, I was laughing by the end.

Evelyn's avatar

Slightly embarrassed by how much I enjoyed this.

Ozy Brennan's avatar

what's the point of self-publishing if you can't write nonsense self-indulgent fanfiction

Evelyn's avatar

What I'm hearing here is that you are *also* slightly embarrassed by how much you enjoyed this.

Jacob Manaker's avatar

I'd never heard of Dath Ilan until now, so I think that means I read this pretty fandom-blind.

And, damn, "dark ilan" is fantastic. I would read many, many sequels. Kudos.

A Sjoberg's avatar

I love connecting on here 🤍 I always sub back and I review my subscribers’ work when it lands in my inbox. I also write dark fiction here on Substack, so if that’s your kind of thing you’re very welcome to check it out. If you’re open to connecting, I’d love to support each other.

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Ozy Brennan's avatar

Comments removed for sounding too much like an AI.

lurker's avatar

I think that that is just Lovecraft canon